Can you read my unfinished mice and men essay? What grade so far?

A B-, or a 3 as we would have it in Scotland (General Grade). You have used quotations (something we get ragged on a lot about) and good Point, Evidence, Explanation. This means you have made your points clear, you have given evidence such as quotations, and you have given a good explanation. However, your language can seem basic at times, ie "animal like". A better example would be "has characteristics similar to that of an animal", and "small character" could be "minor character". Have a quick look through again and change any language that could be a little more sophisticated. Other than that it is very good. You have made your opinions clear without using "I" and have a good opening paragraph, which is very important.